Dirt Nap - #127
01/12/11 - 04:00 AM
DF Gabe Cinquepalmi:
01/13/11 - 03:29 PM
"Here's what I don't get. Back on the roof, they had the sniper rifle, and when they left, they didn't bring it with them (ref. 109). Wouldn't things have gone a lot more smoothly had they taken it with them? Then the sniper would only have his handgun(although he would probably be damn good with just that.)."
01/13/11 - 03:59 PM
DF Gabe Cinquepalmi:
"@DeltaZX: Good eye. Squeezing story into 4 panel increments sometimes means you have to cut out some things to make it interesting. What I cut out was: Walker put the gun down when she told him to get down (he was misunderstanding her intent, as she was really just trying to get him out of the way to shoot at Ross). Also, just at that moment, a pizza delivery guy burst through the door asking if someone ordered a pizza. They told him they didn't, but he still wanted them to pay for it so he didn't get in trouble. They moved further away from the sniper rifle when they decided that they were hungry and could use a slice or two. They gave him a $50, which he couldn't break, but because of the urgency of the situation, they decided to let him have it. He was a starving college kid and could use it more after all. Walker noticed that he was starting to get a hangnail on his left index finger. Agent Ross was distracted during all of this because he got a text from Jill letting him know that his dry cleaning was done. Lady Agent fumbled the pizza box trying to hold it with her non-sniper rifle hand and it fell over the side of the building. The pizza box ruckus caused Agent Ross to notice what was going on... and it picks up from there. These events didn't seem important enough to slow down the action, but they might make the director's cut when I do the omnibus."
01/14/11 - 12:32 AM
"@Gabe M: All that could have easily been shown in one 4-panel comic! But I definitely like this Director's Cut that you mention!"
01/16/11 - 12:23 AM
"@Gabe M: OF COURSE!!!! *insert M Bison* THAT EXPLAINS EVERYTHING!!! Your storytelling prowess is the stuff of legends, and I can't wait for the directors cut. :D"
01/19/11 - 08:47 PM
"Man, that cop is a jerk."
01/20/11 - 11:14 PM
"@Mullahgrrl: Hah! I didn't see it that way before, but you're right! Officer Walker totally denied the goofy kid's call for help in panel 3!"
01/29/11 - 04:14 AM
"Interactive comics! how cool is that?"
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